From Unofficial Handbook of the Virtue Universe

Feature Article Nomination Declined - Review

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Needs a lot of work before I can recommend this page for featured content. I like the general style with the borders around the page, the black or red bars dividing each section with the section title in them, and the use of art assets (even if there is only two.) However, this page is an unappealing wall of text with nothing to keep away the monotony or mix things up past the very beginning, the margin between the text and the border needs to be a little wider, there are several grammar mistakes, and the character art in the top-right field of the page is well used but of poor quality - the white edges of the art need to be trimmed off so they do not create an outline on top of the black bars; the headline image at the very top is also centered in the pages true-middle while the body text directly under it is off center, and then the body text below the top right field image is centered on true-middle again, creating a jarring appearance. Page has a lack of categories. (Review 04/20/2011)