Talk:Blood-Mother

From Unofficial Handbook of the Virtue Universe

Feature Article Nomination Approved - Review

This article has currently been accepted and added to the approved list of articles for Feature. Please be aware that if this page is randomly selected from the approved list it will be checked prior to posting to ensure it is still in a mostly complete and stable state. Below is the review provided by a sysop.

I like this page and is potential featured content with the clause that the user be asked to comb over for a few spelling/grammar mistakes in at least the first few paragraphs. Good use of images and formatting to keep the article fresh as you read down. Bonus points for a Works Cited segment for the images used. Over-all a good example of what you can do with the baseline VV page format. (Review 4/20/2011)

• Note from User* "Page was ran through Word and reviewed for spelling/grammar errors. Thank You"

I believe the Sysop was referring to the sentence structure, use of apostrophe and dangling participles. I started to edit it, but I don't have time right now. I suggest reading the write-up out loud; if it makes sense spoken, it makes sense read. -- Ant 4:51PM EST May 30, 2011