Talk:Infinity Inc/Safety Drill

From Unofficial Handbook of the Virtue Universe

Thank you for reading my stories on the VirtueVerse!

I am always interested in feedback: "Hey, I read this, and it was not a complete waste of my five minutes!" is actually reassuring on those days where I've been staring frustratedly at a blank screen. More detailed reactions, reviews, and constructive criticism on my storytelling technique will also help me understand what my target audience -- total strangers, mostly -- might enjoy in a story. Even specific areas of interest would be great!

So, please, if you have a few minutes and any thoughts at all on the linked story, consider clicking the "Add topic" button on the upper right and type away!--Jarissa 17:25, 8 April 2012 (CDT)

Reader Advisory:

The characters in this story are villains, and victims of villains, and sometimes both at the same time. Not one of the happier stories I've written. Indirect references to brainwashing and forcible body modification, among other villainous deeds, are present but not half so much so as violence and the inherently irredeemable act of treating living sentients as property.

Connections for "Safety Drill"

This manages to be a one-chapter story, so no need for links to other parts!

Relevant links:

All named personalities are associated with Infinity, Inc., mostly by being creations of said villain group.

The on-screen cast includes Killing Dance, Sutra-Dhara Anima, and Fehral. The cheetah doesn't get a name because he's too darned stupid.

References in conversation include fellow II creation Grigaere, plus the head of the corporation, Simon Arkangel.

Also appearing in a certain part of the conversation is the command system programmed into the Hybrids.

Fellow players and VirtueVersers User:Skyburner and User:KillingDance contributed significantly toward the creation of this particular story. All storytelling errors and grammar failures are entirely mine, but a lot fewer of them are present thanks to these two gentlemen!