Talk:The Infiltrators/Transcripts/Alpha
From Unofficial Handbook of the Virtue Universe
This is extremely fascinating. I really think you should consider reworking it to be more clinical and less subjective. Make it sound more like a report and less like a journal entry. Also: I edited a few grammatical errors and also changed a few words for flow at the beginning. -- Ant
This page is wip. We'll edit it as we go, we haven't even designed it yet.-RedH
we need masked in here ASAP 2 make this look pretty, thanks for the feedback tho ant! - JT
Look sick guys Xanatos 09:21, 7 July 2011 (CDT)
