Talk:Xeden

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HOLY HELL THAT IS LONG! (sarcasm intended) This page suffers a bit from wall-of-text-itis and could use a bit of padding between the text and the edge borders. It is thorough, complete, and consistently well written and includes plenty of complimentary images and supporting content. One note however, if possible you need to go through and add attribution to your manipulated photographs and comic book images to credit the original source. (Review 12/17/2011)

"Shortly thereafter, Voltium decided to spend all available time with another group, abandoning his post in favor of being a grunt elsewhere."
No-one in The Challengers is a "grunt". We employ a round table philosophy. That aside, cool Virtueverse. It's very detailed and was an enjoyable read.
Xanatos 13:50, 24 October 2011 (CDT)

Given that he abandoned his post as a leader of the group with no word whatsoever, Chris' outlook and mentality on it is just that. Xeden 18:37, 24 October 2011 (CDT)

Fair enough mate. But with the VV being written from an omniscient perspective, it seems like you the player are making a value judgement about The Challengers. (An argument could even be made that you're godmodding Voltium's character!) I'd suggest changing it to something like; "Shortly thereafter, Xeden found Voltium spending time with another group of heroes, and ultimately abandoning his post at the LSI in favor of being, in Christian's eyes, a grunt in their employ." Xanatos 21:54, 24 October 2011 (CDT)
With the Friends/Neutrals/Allies list, I have always added both the factual, and partial take from Chris' own perspective, into the detailing, being that it is his viewpoint on the characters included that is being relayed. Either way, there is nothing about this that does anything to force anything onto the Voltium character in any shape or form, and it sounds like you're trying to force an argument where there isn't one. I've nothing against the Challengers, and I'm friends with a good few of its members, Voltium included. Xeden 07:46, 25 October 2011 (CDT)